dead
hope u like it.I was really depressed in this one.Any tips or anything to make my poem better if u dont like it.
“dead”
the world is crashing down on me
I try to hold it up but I cant
the load falls
I am under
my cold dead body
lifeless to the world
is left alone
I was ment to be alone
no one would love someone like me
alone and cold
I feel lifeless
like no one cares
like they say they do
but act like they don’t
I’m confused at them
but I carry on with my ways
life was not ment to be this way
depressing and lifeless
thats just the way I live it
just the way I dream it
just the way I feel it
it never changes
it’s always the same
day after day
the same
I wish for once the lifeless me
was happy
was free
i wish for many things
but mostly never get
and I know this is the one thing I will never get
.thanks for believing in me and for always being there.
She is a cool little sister, with extra ordinary talent for writing.
Keep it up Big sis